6.26.2008

Back for More: Part II

Read part I here.

He watched her while she danced amidst the crowds, her red waves bouncing around her face. He hated parties. He always felt out of place. This time it was his best friends birthday and he had to be there. So there he was, sitting at the bar, where he always sat at parties he was dragged to. But tonight she danced and he was glad he came.
She could feel his eyes follow her as she danced. She chuckled to herself. Out of all the guys in the room, she had caught the eye of the weirdo who comes to parties and sits at the bar all night. Then again, she had always had a thing for weirdos. They were far more interesting than all the other guys. She turned his way. On other nights she would have probably let it go, but tonight she felt a little...experimental.
He turned round and ordered another cocktail. When he faced the dancefloor again, he did not have to look very far, because there she was, making her way over to him. He gulped as he fixed his collar.
She smiled.
He smile back. "Make that 2 cocktails please."

11 comments:

Amethyst said...

Men have a thing for women who can dance. I've noticed.

I need more to analyze the characters. But I like the lady so far:)

F. said...

I've heard that people who can dance are also fab in bed...

just saying! :P

ĐǻñĎõøðñ said...

me likey :)

likeairillrise said...

ohh...i love it, i love it! Keep going...

Delicately Realistic said...

La laaaa laaaaa ya F ma itifaqna 3ela shay......tara ur parts are waaaay tooooo short!!!

Ru7mooona ya bloggers.....khalona nishba3 shwaya!

F. said...

Dandooon: Thank you ;)

iRise: I will...stay tuned?

Delicately Realistic: Does that mean you like it? :P This way I can keep you coming "Back for More" ;)

sourire said...

yaay nice keep going!:)

manutdfanatic said...

Not what I expected.

Intriguing nevertheless.

:)

Anonymous said...

You should write a book and make millions ;)

Anonymous said...

very deep too deep how did you know how guys think scary!!! to be honest ur a master of ur craft your words turn into colorful painting when read

RainyDays said...

Again,nicely done. A very worthy read.

 
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